Delicious' Story
I really like the outline of the story. It was definetly an interesting way one may obtain the anthrax disease. I am a little confused about the characters in the stories and the relationship to the different molecular machines he is talking about. I am sure some of this is played out in detail in the story but maybe a little more explanation during the presentation would be helpful. Also, I do remember his presentation a few weeks ago about anthrax but some more background on anthrax and the different molecular machines would be useful. I like the different illistrations in the powerpoint. I am wondering if these were included in the story. If so than children who will read this story will enjoy it more and use the pictures as guidelines throughout the story. Good Job


Tommy