X-Ogenous Presentation Summary

Virus family: The bad guys; six different types
Goods Guys: lymphocytes, Jim, Rebecca, Ma, Village People
X-Ogenous tries to rob a bank. They get intercepted by the lympocytes. During a shootout he is wounded and left for dead by his family. He is found by Jim and brought back to health by the village. He called minslef Indy Geniux (endogenous). He eventually saves the village and children

Suggestions:
Some say it may be a little too violent
Make sure you outline your characters, antagonists, protagonists a little better
maybe set the scene a little better
where is this taking place? In the cell or is it some kind of Western film where the characters are humans
How will this be education for kids if the characters dont really relate back to the science behind the molecular machines